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I write stories a lot, and most of them aren't long but I like them. I'm not finished but how is this story I've written so far? What should the title be? I have it The Blade but I want something better.


It was a rainy day. Izzy a 20 year old scientist was in her bathroom cleaning her dog Sarge (a German shepherd), when she got a call from the National Rain forest Accusation. “Izzy Williams, please come to the Amazon rain forest, a local native has spotted an interesting new cat species. We would like you to check it out!” a man exclaimed. “I’ll be there in a few days.” Replied Izzy. She dried off Sarge and packed 5 shirts, 2 jackets, 3 shorts, 1 pair of jeans, food, dog food, a leash, and shoes. Then she packed an emergency pack, a fishing pole, a net, food, dog food, a rope, blankets, pillows, a tent, a big water jug, a first aid kit, binoculars, and a contactor (radio). Once everything was packed Izzy and Sarge got in their 2007 Jeep Wrangler Rubicon. Izzy drove to the England SA Privet airport where she bought 2 helicopter tickets for South America. When all of their luggage was in the helicopter, they both got into it. There was nobody else on the Helicopter except the pilot, Izzy, and Sarge. Izzy sat in the back of the Machine with Sarge by her side. A few days later, Izzy taking a nap, when the pilot said, “welcome to Brazil, South America, we are now flying over the Amazon Rain forest. We will arrive at the Witchiti airport shortly.” Only after the pilot was done talking Izzy opened her eyes, and looked out the window, but she couldn’t see anything because it was storming very heavily. Izzy saw lighting flash above. “I’m afraid we’re flying through some weather.” The pilot said shakily. Izzy grabbed the survival kit and through it on her back. Then she sat on the ground and started petting Sarge (comforting him) It seemed like hours of flying until, Izzy heard a loud crack, that was probably thunder. She squeezed the arm rests on her chair, and Sarge started to wine. Izzy started to comfort him again, as she did so, she felt the helicopter shake uncontrollably, and start going down. The pilot looked at Izzy “lightning struck one of the blades we’re going down!” Izzy saw him grab a bag, which was probably a pair shoot “sorry” he said “I have to leave you from here” Izzy ran to the front of the helicopter, not paying any mind to Izzy the pilot, jumped out of the helicopter, Izzy watched him disappear, then continued her search for another pair shoot. When she couldn’t find one she tried to control the machine. That didn’t work; all it did was make the helicopter go straight down, Izzy could see the Amazon forest and river. She made the helicopter go in the direction of the river. As the helicopter was inching towards the water Izzy saw a yellow emergency boat. Izzy grabbed it, and Sarge, they were about to hit the water, Izzy jumped, and just in time to because when the helicopter hit the water it exploded. Once the fire had gone down Izzy opened the yellow emergency boat and her and Sarge climbed in. Izzy then opened the emergency pack, she took out the radio which was also a contactor, she turned it on but it didn’t light up Izzy threw it down on the boat and then shoved it back in the pack. Izzy cuddled with Sarge till she fell asleep.
When morning came Izzy was frightened of her surroundings, trees everywhere, as she was looking around her stomach made a gurgling sound. So she rummaged through her bag and found a perfectly red and juicy apple. As she munched into the apple she saw Sarge drool. So she took out a cup of dog food and gave it to him. When both of them were done with breakfast Izzy took out the radio again and turned it on them off, she then opened the battery holder and took both batteries out of it then switched them and turned the radio on again but still nothing came out. She put it back in the bag.
Izzy decided the best thing to do was to get onto land. “I’ll end in the ocean if I don’t” Izzy thought. She used everything that she thought would work but nothing did. After hours of trying Izzy gave up. She looked into the water; she noticed that the water was moving faster and faster. Izzy looked ahead of the raft and saw a terrifying site, the river ended into a 90 degree drop. Izzy thought quickly she soon decided to jump out of the boat and swim to shore. She put her emergency pack on her back and grabbed Sarge. She then pushed him in and jumped in herself. When she jumped in the water was very cold and it made her shiver and the current of water was very strong. She tried to swim to shore but the current was pulling her away. When she looked up and saw Sarge had got to shore he then turned around and jumped back in though. “Bad dog” tried to say through chattering teeth. As she was swimming she felt something warm and fuzzy brush against her arm when she looked down at it, it was Sarge. She grabbed around his chest so he could pull her to shore. When Iz

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